CBBC Commissioner

For my last project I contacted the commissioner for CBBC, Sue Notts, and I asked her what the CBBC would think of The Suitcase Kid. She replied a very helpful email that helped to back up why I had chosen to show my film on CBBC. I decided to give her another email this time regarding 'Totally Maisy,' and weather she thought it was appropriate for CBBC or not. Her response will help Hennie and I to decide on a channel where this TV pilot will targeted for. This is the email I sent:

Dear Sue

I contacted you early this year with regards to my student project on a Jacqueline Wilson adaptation. I was very grateful for the information that you gave me and even got a 1st for that particular project! I was just wondering if you would be able to help again, after adapting a novel, I am now tasked with creating and writing my own TV pilot script. As I enjoy writing for the children's genre very much I decided to continue on the same lines as before and create a teenage pilot programme called 'Totally Maisy'. I was emailing you to see weather you think it is something the CBBC would pick up on as I am not sure if the audience is too young or not for this type of programme as I am currently trying to find the right channel to target my script for. This is the synopsis:

'Totally Maisy'

"This brand new 25 minute pilot tells the story of awkward 15 year old Maisy’s life. She lives at home with her single mum who is much cooler than her and is going on way more dates. Now shes going into year 10 with her BFF’s Cassie and Gemma, and she has a whole new set of dramas to deal with. The girls spy new sixth form hottie Jack, and Maisy knows she just has to make him hers! Luckily she has her boy best friend Rob to walk home with and tell him all about her problems but Maisy just can't see how much Rob likes her. There's the coolest house party on Friday and Maisy and the girls just have to find a way in to it! Meanwhile whilst this is all going on Mums stared to date again, and Maisy can’t work out why her hot new history teacher is being so nice to her…"

I understand you are very busy so I appreciate you taking your time to read this email and any help you may be able to give me. 
Many Thanks
Maddie Ireland